Who are you….I gaze in your eyes….My destroyer, savior….healer
You say….do not ask me that…I am just a speck…
a speck floating in the substratum of life….
a speck of thought somewhere in the universe…I am just someone whom you meet day on day.
Then why do I find myself spin in the flux of emotions…
and why do we love each other as intersecting orbits in the Nebulian dust and not as two mortals.
Answer me…I will ask no more.
Answer me…I will ask no more.
5 comments:
Hey Almitra!!!
Love the blogs...out of words for the immortal thoughts expressed here.
A definate and noticeable change in writing...passionate still...rather more so!!
Absolutely Fabulous *****
- you know who!
Hey Almitra!!!
What can i say but fabulous.
Extremely love the fact that you keep getting better and better with each new one!!!
A different style....passionate still....rather more so now!
You Rock!
Absoultely Fabulous
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- You know who!
You kept on saying that you would not ask anymore.. but finally you managed to land up with all sorts of questions yourself... Wonder whom you had been asking.. me? or your own self..
How did you ever think that you had been gazing into my eyes? You were looking for yourself in my eyes.. You looked for that special you in me....You wanted to find the healer, the saviour.. the destroyer.. I had always liked the idea of destroying you.. and yet healing you at the same time! But never quite thought that I could have been healing you or destroying you...
For me a candle kept on burning with wax dripping about the cylinder when you started with your inquisitiveness into my eyes.. I could see the darkness of the candle beneath your eyes.. perhaps the flicker of the candle was visible in my eyes when u gazed deep into them..
You that we are mortal... how much of a speck is a mortal? I have been tryin to find an answer to the query myself before I had met you.. I never sensed the insersecting orbits of the Nebullian dust when I longed to meet you maybe just for a glimpse of yours... I never quite had the words for you.. You always wanted more of them and i always had less to offer........But still the crave was of one glimpse of you.. Never knew whether thats what people call love...but I never quite knew you were amidst the spin of emotions... I was sinking... never quite let you know that cause I never thought you wanted to see me in my eyes..
I reeled with the dreams in my eyes... my candle burnt through out the night... Perhaps the flicker kept your verses flowing..
Trust me, I would keep the candle burning for you... Rest of the world.. well.. how did it ever matter to me?
( the words just flowed as a counter..pls do not take them personally.. tis just a blog with maybe something else, something deep down in my own self)
Hey....u have written a complete post as a comment...why dont u publish it...its real good...and i am honoured dat my write could inspire you so much!!!
words dont flow when they are asked to... very unruly and erratic.. just like me...
since these words flowed for your words.. let them stay as yours.. monsooon gift from me..
i dont like publishing my words as such...
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