Tuesday, June 26, 2007


I am getting eroded layer by layer…all that remains is a thin film which breathes, lives & dances too.

I thought you were a breeze just to understand that you swept me off .

I open my eyes in your arms as you lower your face on mine with those ever shining eyes brimming with me

And you say... Walk with me my mermaid.

I gaze down to my unfortunate destiny searching my soles & you say...
Hey...let me swim with you.

Why do you love me so much?

8 comments:

still life said...

really amazing
hope i dont fall in love with a mermaid, i dont swm verry well !!!!!

Almitra said...

She dosent allow you to drown...d only misfortune being she can come on land but cant walk.

Anonymous said...

why we are here...........?
whom we are..........?
what role we have to play.........?
The q can't be answerable they can just be expirience.....The same wayI feel......
why one loves the other.....?
it can be feel.....
I would never love to be with swim with...b'coz as u said it won't be allow.....
but I would be interested in mixing with the water so i can hug always and she can't leave me also.....and i can feel her every second till i exists there.....and may be the both's presence is dependent on each other......

Anonymous said...

The me is unknown......
the you are unkown.....
and we can only know this unkown world by getting us .......and losing me ....with known.......

Anonymous said...

what do u exactly want.......
is known to me......
what I want is known to you.....
the problem is entering into eachothers world...which you never allows...or he can't change....
but there's third world beyond both ......and which is bind by both .....
and yet its to be explored.......

Almitra said...

Hey Mukul...i think the post has inspired you a thought...well a writer is emerging...keep it up!!!

Unknown said...

Hmmm...It took me back to a glorious day in my life...that walk in the rain...vividly remember every droplet of innocence pouring on me...i sang to myself..is this love..

Almitra said...

Hmm..Gaurav...the sunshine guy is thinkin about rains dats interestin....Yes...its love in evry drop buddy...participate in d Divine Celebration