We made love….
Took me in his arms as I quivered to his touch & he soothed me of my ache…
We made love… in the holy water of the ganges
We made love… in the ashes of the dead
We made love… in the serenity of ladhak
We made love… on the sacred stone of Mecca
We made love…in the melody of Dwarka
We made love….in the purity of Kabah
We made love…on the lap of Shiva
We made love...amidst the demis & demons
We made love...to each other, to the undying spirit
We made love like never before……
My Warrior....I still love you
10 comments:
u r so smuch full of love and passion that i am obssessed vth the very thought of this blog.. this is more than one can experiment
Hey...thnx for the high praising words, it surely will give me the impetus to write more...& yes as far as passion is concerned it gets a vent thru the words.
Write more.
don't write more, or it won't take time to get obsessed with you too
and truely.. knwoing you more.. em sure.. u vl be duin beter beter my dearest hippie friend
now that's a wonderful poem with an amazing mix of emotional sexuality and intuitive passion. When you make love and that too full of emotions, you realize what actually 'pleasure' is. Life's not about materials but about deep experiences and this poem has made me realize what actually one feels when in love. though i would say love is inexpressible, you gotta feel it intensely before you earn some right to express. and Kapal has wonderfully done so! Keep the good job ON>>>>> wonderful poetry
The soul completely wound in its expression..a mind at rest..divinity finally rendered to us mortals.
ummm....the fact of the matter...yet remains that you still seem to be in love with your SELF
Hey...anonymous...if you know ME so well...unveil yourself!!!
what's there to unveil......REVEAL...yourself.
Wow! Charming lines from you. Too good to resist reading it again an again
Keep writing more.
-Stella Roy
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